The Coincidental Critic

Exploring the art of storytelling.

The Forgotten Parent


I liked Erica’s rendition of “Your Song.”  Her softer tone gave the song a more innocent mood.  It was beautiful.

There were four parents who met together to discuss the boy’s drinking the mold.  Oh, you didn’t notice the fourth parent?  Well the director didn’t want you to notice him either.  This fourth parent had absolutely no lines and barely any camera time.  He was cut out of most scenes.  It was so awkward to see him sitting off to the side.  Why even have him there?

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